Prompt: Based on your brainstorming via Edmodo, write a short poem elaborating on your dream and/or why dreams or visions are an impotent part of life.
"Dreams"
Oh dreams.
What a wonderful part of life.
They inspire and create a new life.
Without them you don't have a life to live.
They are as beautiful as a rainbow.
Dreams don't appear by themselves.
You must seek them out.
But in time they will appear.
But the choice is yours to accept or decline.
Oh dreams.
What a wonderful part of life.
They inspire and create a new life.
Without them you don't have a life to live.
They are as beautiful as a rainbow.
Great blog. I like how you used repetition. All you could of added is one or two more stanzas to go more in depth in what your thoughts are. Overall, Great Blog!
ReplyDeleteNice blog! I agree with James when he says that you could've maybe when more in depth and added more stanzas. I also like the repetition you used and the fugitive language you used. Such as "They are as beautiful as a rainbow".
ReplyDeleteGreat blog this week, I thought the repetition was a intelligent addition, the figurative writing was great, and the only complaint that I could find is that you did not go into great depth than you could have.
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